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TCO-08B Christmas Heart !!

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Merry Christmas people !! xDDD ♥♥♥ This is my OC Martha using a special Christmas clothing ^^ I really looooove the result and bit a bit i'm more near to the full anime style i'm triying to develop, i hope you like her my dear friends ^^

Here you can see the fairy that provides the power clothings that was drawed 2 years ago and next you can see some images of my OC Martha:

ANewWorld fiction: The royal fairy of Christmas by AnimeColorfullArt  TCO 08 Magic Heart by AnimeColorfullArt TCO 03 - Princess, the pact of magic by AnimeColorfullArt TCO 04 - Scape, the pact of the rogue by AnimeColorfullArt

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Man, finally got to this critique. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> It's so colorful! Her face is so adorable and happy! >W<

Merry Christmas and here is a list on thing on how you would improve! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> :

- I feel like there is a lack of emphasis. The girl herself doesn't stand out by the mess of objects everywhere and the objects can be distracting from the real subject who is meant to be the focus of this piece.

- The shading on the knee looks a bit weird and kinda geometric-like. Reminds me of a pokeball. It should be like a free flowy shape like the shading on the shoes or the fur.

- Since this piece is kinda confusing, I wonder where is the other leg. I don't think her leg would be that thin. :/

Hope this helps! Happy Holidays!